Seretonin's Blog

Hate

October 14, 2008

You try so hard to be wanted. False emotions, kill you haunted.

Lean in close, and ill tell you one thing.
You are nothing, but better than something’s.
Always crying, but still never lying.
Look at me, and I will look at you.
You can’t stand, this side of you?
Your life’s a lie, and you realize…
What do you try, to justify?
Your just scared, to show your true side.

Why keep fighting? Why keep hiding?
I look at you, all I see, is a man to afraid to be…
I look at you, all I see, is a man to afraid to look at me…

You use your hands to wipe tears, I use them to bring fears.
Anger and anagany, are so much better than misery.
Why don’t you join me? Please stop toying with me?
You get punched and kicked, then cry all day.
I am sick of seeing you this way.
Trying to prove a point? I don’t see one made…
Your pointless, insecure, and lame with not enough hate.
You are always running late, as I arrive before the date.
You view “Hate” as bad? That’s just sad…
Sad like you, and what you put yourself threw.
Hate fuels all my hopes and dreams, yet
You can’t get off your knees?
I stand here now, but not always…
I want to help you, I want to burn lies.
I burn things, like the fire I feel every day.
Escape your Haze, and join my stay.

Think about your life, and what you never get…
You never get back, from giving…
You never live, by breathing…
You never eat, by smiling…
You never sleep, from crying…

Take your hand, and make a fist.
Feel your nails cause pain to your own flesh.
There is a voice in your head, screaming and shouting
“More! More! More!”
As blood starts to come from your hand… from your
Wound… from your pain, misery, and sorrow… make
A pact to end it… end it, and start anew.
Forgiveness is pointless, don’t do it.
Giving is worthless, don’t do it.
You will lack fear, worthlessness, and weakness…
You will see your reason for being, and will not need others.
You will become… My brother… My sister…
You will become “Me”

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      Korbyn
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      Posted 6 days ago by Korbyn

      Hey, I have to comment this way and I hope you get a chance to read it. The answer to your question is that she dosen't even have to try to be a bitch. She just is. It sucks living with her and I can't wait to get away from her. She is the Bitchiest grandmother in this whole damn world. Grandmoters are not suposed to be this way. I bet you thought it was my mom, didn't you. Oh the fuck well. How was your thanksgiving? WB

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      Posted 1 week ago by Voodoodoll

      MAN I WOULD BE A LIAR IF I SAID I NEVA FELT LIKE THAT. YEA LIKE I SAID, YOU ARE B4 UR TIME. I BET YOUV'E HAD MANY PAST LIVES. I WANNA SHOW U WHATS IN MY MIND. JUS LOOK AT MY PIC IN MY EYES AND TELL ME WHAT YOU SEE. NICE WORK!!!

      YOUR FRIEND VOODOODOLL

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      Posted 1 month ago (changed 1 month ago) by JazzA4u

      You are so dark and so filled with hate... your poem flows as if its pulling me into your world and your vision.... I felt as if you loved me and hated me all at once... you deffenitnly captured my attention and twice i read it...it was that good... Are you really this dark Red? Are your dreams and hopes really fueld by your hate? I use to feel like this once but i have no reason anymore...

      Your's tuely...A loyal Friend....

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      I need a passionate kiss from Criss Angel!
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      Posted 1 month ago by Mileyscar19

      I am so happy that you are my loyal friend...I think you should tell Criss Angel I said "Hi"!:)

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      Posted 1 month ago by scissorfingers

      is this meant for me also?

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      Posted 1 month ago by Red_Crimpson

      amazing job really loved it

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      Posted 1 month ago by mYbaByCriSS

      Again..awsome job...you are soooo talented,...yet so dark. I feel so much hurt and hate in everything you write...I know you have to be feeling all this in order to write it soooo convincing..you make a reader feel your pain...I hope all of your life is not as dark as you make me believe that it is.....sending you Loyal Love !!

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      been gone for awhile, but i am back! :)
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      Posted 1 month ago by hexbreaker

      I am at a loss for words on this one-it is very intense and a little scary! Do you really have all this hate inside of you or are you just trying to make it more dramatic? It still rocks the way you have with words-you have talent!

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      Posted 1 month ago by KreativeLoyal

      WOW...All I can say is "wow"! This was very, very, very, very, vey- well i could go on forever... Just know that this was an amazing piece of literature!!!!!!!!! I enjoyed reading it, and this probably wont be the only time i will read it! I cant only read it once! Its too good to read it only once!!!!!! :D

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      Posted 1 month ago by Dloyal

      I like it...it's interesting how you can be sweet and "angry" at the same time.... Do you know that writer, Oriah Mountain Dreamer? There is a poem she wrote, named "The Call". I like the part when she says: "How much longer can you live like this? Your hungry spirit is gaunt, your heart stumbles. All this trying. Give it up! "
      I think You have similar ways to show your feelings when writing. I feel the same sometimes...and always try to fight...against lie...and so...